Nowadays, people have adopted an unhealthy lifestyle. Why do think this is? How could this problem be solved?
Over the past few years, the advancement in technology has made human life easy and comfortable. However, it has made some detrimental effects on human health such as poor diet and lack of physical activity. This essay will first discuss the long working hours as a primary reason leading to an unhealthy way of life and later submit the measures to be taken by governments and employers as the most viable solution.
Hours-long sitting jobs and use of electrical appliances are one of the major reasons affecting the well-being of people. This is due to their busy schedule and stressful jobs that working-class skip physical exercise and prefer to consume ready to eat packed or junk food, which causes serious health problems such as obesity and cardiac disorder. In addition to this, the extreme usage of automatic electrical utilities such as dishwasher, washing machine and transport vehicles such as cars and bikes also plays a major role in a reduced passive form of exercise. For instance, our ancestors used to be physically fit due to walking miles of distance daily to reach out to each other and automatically indulged in strenuous physical activities to carry out their usual tasks with manpower.
One possible solution to this problem would be the initiatives to be taken by the administration. Governments should enforce strict laws to limit the working hours and impose a heavy amount of fine on those acting against the law. At the same time, the authorities should also launch health awareness programs to make people aware of the benefits of a balanced diet and physical exercise. For example, New Zealand is one such country, which has enacted law of fixed 40 hours of work per week and money collected from the fines is invested in various health-related programs. In addition to this, employers should also organize fitness programs to promote the health of their employees and managers should consistently encourage their team to participate in such activities to gain the benefit. For instance, most of the IT companies offer their workers free membership of a gym and motivate them to set fitness goals.
To conclude, people are leading a sedentary lifestyle due to the advancement in technology and extended working hours. In order to mitigate this problem, legal bodies should impose the aforementioned employment laws and employers should organise fitness events and push their staff to indulge in such events.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1375 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7809968986 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2657458476 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130282912659 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461147603263 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545652809074 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835986413682 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00318174244309 0.056905535591 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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