Nowadays many people get married and have children in their 30s rather than when they were younger. Is it a positive or negative development? Is it a positive or a negative development? Give your opinion and examples based on your experience.
In this contemporary world, where advancement in technology has already influenced lifestyle of people so does their age of tying knot and people prefer to marry and family planning after the age of 30. However, there are some people who hold the opinion that it is too late to marry and have kids later in 30. Though, I strongly accede with former viewpoint and in this essay i will support my opinion with examples and explain how it is positive for the growth of an individual and the family associated with an individual.
Firstly, I believe that one should be mature enough to take the responsibility of one's soulmate to live happy married life. In my opinion, this level of mutual understanding, maturity and sense of responsibility is being attained by one at the age of 30. I want to mention the outcome of one survey conducted on couples who got divorced to analyze the reason of rapid increase in number of divorces and 80% of such couples own up that they were careless and were not mutually understandable towards each other. Therefore, I believe that one's careful and sensible attitude is a paramount factor for getting married.
Lastly, i think that consistency and stability in career plays a momentous role in one's married life. If one's career is stable and couple is progressing well in terms of monetary, then they can provide their children a better life, better opportunities, and education from prestigious schools and universities. Moreover, such parents can spend time with their children which is most important factor for the mental growth of children. Mature parents can teach moral values to their children in a pragmatic way. There have been multiple instances of children vandals seen by flicking through the pages of newspapers when parents failed to teach moral values to their children due to their struggling period of jobs which made their children brat.
To recapitulate, marriage and have children is the paramount decision of one's life and one should take this decision rationally by considering long-term aspects as mentioned in this essay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01729106628 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7748854397 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561959654179 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3788407076 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.923076923 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156334082384 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543542143991 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304422906838 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830090744867 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409042786227 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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