It is generally claimed that in the past people trended to get married and have children when they are younger than their thirties, as oppose to people in this day and age who perfer to do so at thirties or later. Although the negatives of having family later cannot be ignored, the positives outweigh the drawbacks and this essay will discuss why.
The first primary positive is that to have more time to prepare for future expenditure. The age range between 20 and 29 years is the best time for the vast majority of people to finish their post-secondary education and be employed. In the same time, these people having a dream to build a family will dedicate both time and efforts to work to augment a sum of money to be ready for a plethora of expenditures in their marriage life. Thus, getting married and having children at or after their thirties will assure that they could affort both themselves and their family.
Furthermore, people will gain sufficient time to learn how to treat their children. A problem in a family is a serious debate as the number of parents have superficial knowledge of how to treat them. For instance, some parents do not understand the importance of mornitoring and setting boundaries for their children but instead being permissive. As a result, these children will definitely lack discipline and will cause negative impacts to the society such as behaving badly at school. On the other hand, if parents have children at age of 30 years or later, they will undoubtedly have time to lean or to get advice from an expert or from reading through books and online articles to become well-informed about raising children. Consequently, they will produce a good citizen to serve and optimize the society.
To conclude, the positives of getting married and have children at the age of 30 years is imperative than the negatives. Therefore, I believe that if parents have children at that time, they will confront fewer financial problems and have more ideas about how to deal with their children effectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: AS_OPPOSE_TO_AS_OPPOSED_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as opposed to'?
Suggestion: as opposed to
...n they are younger than their thirties, as oppose to people in this day and age who perfer t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87106017192 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64793036333 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515759312321 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2449651782 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.428571429 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232067619439 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931521460786 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579142819968 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17288012509 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467841193293 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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