Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays, youngsters are involved in different activities to relax themselves like sports, cooking etctera and shopping is one the most famous among this list. I completely agree that this is certainly a positive development. The essay will explore the reasons for this.
First of all, in todays fast moving world the young adults have such a busy schedule in their lives that they rarely get a chance to enjoy. People are involved in stressfull job routines which make them depressed seeking for opportunities to relax their mind. In theses cases, going out for a shopping can just be wonderful because it involves lots of fun. Shopping helps the individuals to be themselves and look for their interests in market.
Secondly, teenagers are lacking creativity today because of the pressure from the society to perform better in every task they do be it academics or proffessional. Here, looking for various trends in different verticals like electronics, clothing, books comes to the rescue. Shopping gives chance to the individuals to explore whats happening around and this gives them a chance to take time for themselves and develop their creativity. Hence, shopping can help in increasing the creativity level.
Furthermore, the trend of shopping as a leisure activity is increasing because it can be done alone and as well as with a group. It doesn't require any special support to enjoy.
To conclude, in my opinion, development of shopping as a most popular activity in youngsters to pass time is surely positive one. This helps them to relax their minds and increase their creativity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15708812261 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78678681757 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4359575955 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251936634397 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840011120106 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657404205438 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151461947499 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785638120238 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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