The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's modern era, internet is highly being used to access any kind of information. While some people do not agree with this advantange, I totally agree with that this is good thing.

First of all, all kinds of information is available on internet on just one click. There are different website on providing knowledge videos, content of studies and even for fun. Whatever kind of search a person is doing , he/she will can find number of responses for that information and choose the best for the reference as per the need. So, if availablity of information on internet ia making the life easier for the people.

Secondly, usage of internet to access the information has reduced the utility of time. Previously, people use to search for the information at different places, from newspapers, magazines and by talking to experienced people. This way of looking for information used to take a lot of time and with the help of technology these days people are left with more time which they can invest in other activities that they wish to do.

In conclusion, I would say that with the use of internet it has become very easier for the public to look for any kind that's needed. Because all the information is just one click away so it leaves more time with people to enjoy other things in life.

I completely agree with the above mentioned notion that our reach to information has greatly being increased with the help of internet.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'websites'?
Suggestion: websites
... on just one click. There are different website on providing knowledge videos, content ...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hatever kind of search a person is doing , he/she will can find number of response...
^^
Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...the utility of time. Previously, people use to search for the information at differ...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ier for the public to look for any kind thats needed. Because all the information is ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.768 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58877092326 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8937872534 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170598889543 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707305357767 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315460743794 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10703307749 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354609285366 0.056905535591 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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