The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The Internet has changed our lives in many ways, and easily accessible information is one of them. Those days are gone when books were the only source of information and one had to read the whole book to access a bit of relevant information. The Internet has made our lives easier by providing quick and easy access to every type of required information. I strongly believe that this is such a blessing to humankind that the internet provides instant information irrespective of what time and place you are in.
Primarily, students usually get most of the benefits on the internet by accessing famous writer’s lectures. Multiple video lectures are available on several topics in a simplified version that students face difficulty understanding from the textbooks. They can learn better by watching and reading more examples on the internet.
Secondly, the internet helps women in their daily chores by providing better alternatives for repetitive household tasks. Ladies usually prefer watching cooking and interior decoration videos on the internet that helps them make their house more beautiful. To exemplify, plenty of women watch their favorite shows during leisure time, they also get the desired information about cosmetics by checking other buyer’s reviews.
Last but not least, people get the help of the internet to grow in their careers by learning new skills as the internet is flooded with the latest tools and technologies. There are a variety of free courses available on multiple websites where people can learn new skills from scratch. For instance, there are a plethora of advanced tools available online that are replicas of different scenarios which helps people in interview preparation.
To sum up, the internet has become a popular source that provides immense information to many people from different age groups. It has made our lives easier and more disciplined by providing valuable information instantly. In fact, I would say that people cannot imagine their lives without the internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33229813665 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77544726468 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6568463678 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.3125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141324876032 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502621763769 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308250538128 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767523352308 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452584796563 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.