You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
explain that you have left the coat there
say what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was in the pockets
make some suggestions about how to get all of your belongings back
Dear Rohan,
I hope you find this letter in good health. I am writing to inform that I have reached safely, however forgot to pickup my coat at your place. Even though I made sure to take it with me, the outer wear left in hurry.
It is grey coloured long jacket and my initials are carved on the hand-cuff links. When I tried to takeout my wallet, I suddenly understood that it is hanged at your hook at back door, only item is required currently is my wallet which has my driving license in it.
Furthermore, it has my car keys in it along with the purse. I need it badly as without car keys, I can not travel on a daily basis. Can you please do me a favour ? Ajit has stayed with you and he might be coming on withing 2 days, please send my stuffs with the coat through him.
Best wishes,
Max
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 654.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16560509554 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11381035092 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694267515924 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0027271882 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194735084186 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067468136201 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676914489826 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134640644063 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845180836153 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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