You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own.
Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter
introduce yourself
say why you are interested in this sports club
ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Deepak Sharma and I recently enrolled for a computer course at the DAV College. I am writing this letter to grab some information regarding the sports facilities in your sports club.
Let me elaborate, I am quite passionate about sports and computer, unfortunately, my college does not have sports facilities due the less space.
Thus, I was seeking information from Google search engine about nearby clubs. I was quite impressed with the customer's feedback about your club's services. Therefore, I would like to request you to provide the desired details at your earliest.
Firstly, I would like to know about monthly and yearly membership plans offered by your club. Also, don’t forget to mention student discount if available.
Secondly, I would prefer experienced personal trainer who can guide me on daily exercise and diet plan.
I would really appreciate if you could provide me aforementioned details at your convenience.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Deepak Sharma
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...y clubs. I was quite impressed with the customers feedback about your clubs services. The...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25149700599 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81474070705 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682634730539 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0430247035 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0833333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248851790459 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838152253012 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109806253585 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106669786368 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918034430338 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...y clubs. I was quite impressed with the customers feedback about your clubs services. The...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25149700599 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81474070705 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682634730539 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0430247035 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0833333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248851790459 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838152253012 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109806253585 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106669786368 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918034430338 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.