You have a pen-friend living in another country and he/she is curious to learn about the major news items in your country.Write a letter to your pen-friend. In your letter:•Greet your friend and say why you are writing.•Briefly describe a news story.
Dear Mary,
hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am glad to discover your curiosity regarding news stories from my country, therefore, I wanted to write back immediately to inform you of one such event which is happening these days. Let me explain briefly.
To elucidate most of the news channels are covering general elections in india as they are due once every five years. Although elections were supposed to happen later in the year however election commission decided to the hold it a bit earlier due to the instability of the existing government. The elections in india are considered to be the biggest event of democracy globally whereby 1.33 billion go out to cast their vote to elect the prime minister of india and the respective member of parliament. Additionally, the election season lasts nearly two months and is conducted in five phases. At the moment voting is in the final phase and the results will be announced on the 25th of June.
Lastly, domestic media houses, as well as foreign newspapers, cover the election campaign for almost six months in which they interview politicians.
I hope the information above has provided you with the insights of this event.
Best wishes
Saad
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, however, lastly, regarding, so, therefore, well, as for, in brief, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91346153846 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63157812013 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668269230769 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9192664499 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9090909091 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104053031274 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377358673535 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642210876216 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671115755415 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848216490131 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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