Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing to request your assistance concerning an online distance course that I would like to pursue at Western Sydney University. The university website helped me get your contact information to know further details about the system I want to opt for.
I recently searched for some good international tertiary educations that can supply an E-learning course in Bachelor of Business (Marketing). I hope you could provide more information about the exact opening time of the program; furthermore, I would be grateful if you could let me know that I can start the course from October this year. My workload and pressure will be less at that time. Also, I would like to see the enrollment process and how students will arrange the tests throughout the course period. It would be beneficial to send me the detailed information.
I am working as an intern at an overseas bank in the marketing department; however, I am learning a different field and do not relate to the job. Therefore, I need more exposure and knowledge to enhance my career. Hoping your University can be able to provide me the knowledge I would like to gain.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Phạm Khánh Linh
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85645933014 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79572452851 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622009569378 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7055217143 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5833333333 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232140562805 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722190828562 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630212311121 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143570869423 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570479923948 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.