You have received a bill from the company which supplies the electricity to your house. The bill contains a figure much higher than you expected.
Write a letter to the manager at the electricity company.
In your letter
• tell the manager about the letter you received
• explain why you think this amount is too high
• describe what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain regarding my home electricity bill which is beyond my expectations. I am Tina, living in park avenue and have been using electricity provided by your company for two years.
I received a bill on 1st May for the duration of one month. As per the bill description, It states that a total of 1000 units was consumed in the previous month which cost me 20000 rupees. I am surprised by this figure because it is not accurate as per the current single unit rate.
Moreover, I would like to add here that for the last fifteen days I was out of town and, hence, at my place the use of electricity was totally shut. Because of that, I could not understand how this large amount has occurred.
Could you please check the mistake from your systems and help me to resolve this issue. Please reconsider my case and give me the correct bill as soon as possible.
I look forward to a prompt revert from you.
Yours faithfully,
Tina
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...umed in the previous month which cost me 20000 rupees. I am surprised by this fig...
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Line 10, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...umed in the previous month which cost me 20000 rupees. I am surprised by this fig...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 32.9175257732 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 937.175257732 172% => OK
No of words: 342.0 206.0 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7134502924 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77181878525 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.347953216374 0.622605031667 56% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 290.88556701 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6537783473 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.29896907216 279% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.94845360825 279% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220255813271 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793412599319 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488165237279 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111114110616 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456051763451 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.0 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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