You have seen an advertisement from a couple who live in Australia for someone to teach their two children your language for a year Write a letter to the couple In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could

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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year.
Write a letter to the couple. In your letter:
* explain why you think you would be suitable for the job
* say what else you could do for the family
* give your reasons for wanting the job

Dear Sir and Madam,
 I am writing regarding a job advertisement for the language trainer on thebestjob.com to express my interest in the same.
I am showing my interest in this job because I have done Masters's in Hindi and have more than 5 years experience of teaching children of age 7 to 15 years. All these skills show that I am eligible for this job as per your requirements.
Moreover, Your children will stay at home for language training because I am providing a home tuition service. This will release your worries about your offsprings and I will take good care of them in the absence of you both.
I am currently employed as a part-time employee at a restaurant. That job does not give me satisfaction because I feel more satisfied while teaching. Thus, I desperately wanted to join as a home tutor.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity. I have attached my resume with this letter.
 I look forward to a prompt revert from you.
Yours faithfully,
Tina 

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, regarding, thus, while, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84971098266 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1894003171 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64161849711 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5407665862 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9166666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267399861191 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887438093791 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527073514071 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128263260989 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531809724879 0.0580467560999 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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