Write a letter to your friend to request information about the city you are planning to move to and in your letter, write the following:
Where and when you want to work
What type of job it is
For how long you want to work there
Dear John,
I hope you are doing wonderful in Canada. It has been four years since you moved there. Based on your experience, I'm also planning to apply for a work permit in a couple of months. Before that, I'm thinking to get some information about work culture in Canada.
As per my knowledge, I've thinking to apply to the Information Technology industries located in Brampton, where you live. I'll be there in the upcoming spring, in the month of May.
I was wondering about few questions like what is the work environment at your place? How difficult it would be for a new immigrant to get adjusted to Canadian culture? Answers to all these questions will help me to prepare my mind for future challenges.
I was planning initially to work there for about 2 years and it would be more than enough time to get mixed with the community. Share all the information with me.
Hope we catch up soon.
Yours Truly,
Ally
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| 2021-04-22 | Varsha Thakur | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... moved there. Based on your experience, Im also planning to apply for a work permi...
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Line 2, column 196, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...mit in a couple of months. Before that, Im thinking to get some information about ...
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Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ulture in Canada. As per my knowledge, Ive thinking to apply to the Information Te...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...es located in Brampton, where you live. Ill be there in the upcoming spring, in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58787878788 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56697969541 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654545454545 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0558072134 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.2307692308 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6923076923 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25934285349 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804857047775 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515257699445 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112621934261 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785200243442 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.45 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.