You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.
Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:
» explain why you are writing
» express concern about the missing card
» ask them what they intend to do
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear sir or Madam,
I am writing in regards of the acknowledgement letter of the new debit card. I did receive two letters from the bank so far. one for acknowledging of card and recent one that suppose to have my cards but Unfortunately, when i checked my mail box, the package was open with no card and PIN. Circumstance could have gone worse if I would not have profoundly taken appropriate action.
Someone could have potentially withdrawn enough money from my account, I was much worried about my card Since it was pre-activated from the bank along with PIN for my online banking. However, right away after i saw the letter, I registered the complaint to the customer care support center as preventive action, already asked to block the card now. Before I did that I had got $100 withdraw alert from the bank which I suspect due to that.
Even though, New card is in blocked status, I must say that update my security prospect to person collection of any important document from the Bank as I am not to far. On the other hand, I would request you to take necessary action for the fraud transaction on my account and investigate about the happened. Please contact me on +1 647-888-2244
I hope that you will provide the resolution soon on the matter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear sir or Madam, I am writing in regards of the acknowledgement letter of the new d...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...ceive two letters from the bank so far. one for acknowledging of card and recent on...
^^^
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o have my cards but Unfortunately, when i checked my mail box, the package was op...
^
Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...line banking. However, right away after i saw the letter, I registered the compla...
^
Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n, already asked to block the card now. Before I did that I had got 00 withdraw alert ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63111111111 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7208350207 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635555555556 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7018734952 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336966352607 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125574835689 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675883989388 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183407327057 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826590223159 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.