You have received a record that needs to be translated. Write a letter to a translating agency and say
– What is there on the record?
– Why do you want to translate it?
– Why is it so urgent for you to get it translated
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am sending this letter along with a record that needs to be translated on an urgent basis. These are my medical records from Carlson medical center, New Delhi, India. Apparently, I am applying for a Chinese medical visa for my surgery scheduled next month in Shanghai medical center. I can have my surgery in half the price that I have been quoted in India.
First of all, the Chinese embassy requires the medical record translated to Mandarin, their native tongue, to get the visa stamping process to start. The visa procedure may take one to two weeks to complete, and I will be running out of time soon.
Secondly, I can then send this translated medical record to my agent in Shanghai and get looked up by professionals before my arrival. The translated record will help my appointed Chinese doctors to understand the situation if they have any language barrier.
I would appreciate if you could return my translated record by end of this week. That will give me just enough time to arrange everything.
Yours faithfully,
Stanley John
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| 2019-01-10 | Stanleyjohnt | 82 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g. Yours faithfully, Stanley John
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61509025031 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620879120879 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4639314896 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5454545455 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244348485553 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09045413954 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795732699397 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15099064138 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256009571058 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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