Dear Mike,
I’m sorry. I couldn’t write to you for a long time, but now I got the pen to share a happy news with you. I got a new job offer, and now I have been working there for about a week. I had to prepare for these interviews, and that’s why I was so busy in the last couple of weeks.
As you know, I had been working at a local company before joined with this, and there I couldn’t get much exposure since there were limited opportunities. Also, I thought that it would be better to adhere to the English speaking office culture since I have a migration plan.
You might be heard about this ABC since it an international company, and there are many branches around the world. I joined with them as a Senior Software Engineer, and part of my team members are working in the USA. So, I might have to work at night to join some meetings two-three times for a week. However, working hours are flexible.
I have a lot of things to share with you. I will write to you when I get free time again. By the way, I am going to sit for the IELTS exam in the coming month and get back to you with the results. I shall stop now.
Regards,
VK
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'happy news'.
Suggestion: happy news
...ng time, but now I got the pen to share a happy news with you. I got a new job offer, and no...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve been working there for about a week. I had to prepare for these interviews, an...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, speaking of, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21333333333 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40503176232 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582222222222 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9251184322 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7142857143 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151915639629 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502498008262 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474102187245 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948337555343 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308464647422 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.