You need to take leave from your work of over one-month for personal reasons. Write a letter to your boss.In your letterExplain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need.Explain how you will keep up to date while you are awaySuggest how yo

Dear Mr.Smith,

I am writing this letter to request permission to take some leave during the coming two months.

As you know, my wife also a Software Engineer, and She was requested to travel to Netherland to attend to customer site implementation. She should travel with our small child since he is very young, and always looking for his mother. Someone should be there to take care of my son when my wife is attending customer sites. This time I have to take that responsibility since we do not have any other person to protect my family. According to the plan, we have to leave here by September 01 and will be back on October 10. All together it will be twenty-five working days.

I will check the mails regularly and will be able to reply within the day. Moreover, I will join all critical meetings online. In addition to these, I will set up a meeting with people who are reporting to me, once a week.

I have cross-checked with the team whether they can cover my work, without mentioning the reason. They will be able to cover some work, however, there are some works which I should attend. If you can grant me working from home facility, then I may able to cover that as well. I will report the working time and consequently, I may able to reduce the number of leave days.

I look forward to hearing positive feedback from you.

Yours Sincerely,
VK

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, well, in addition, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56048387097 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52033547785 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608870967742 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4670256854 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6875 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197729066605 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635081192946 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374626311735 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104068596052 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029027426273 0.0580467560999 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.