It is commonly believed that introducing more and more physical activities and exercises to the school syllabus will resolve the increasing number of overweight people to society. In my opinion, I completely agree that the school curriculum should be updated with more physical lessons to build a healthy and strength generation.
Adding physical activities to the school curriculum will encourage and force students to do regular exercises and it will make sure to avoid adding unhealthily and overweight people to society. Moreover, continuous physical activities will reduce the weight of the students who are suffering from obesity. So the physical education will guide the next generations to a healthy life.
When the children do the exercises and physical activities regularly, the parents will start to follow them, since they have to guide their children. Consequently, then the current generation also will do continuous exercises. Adding physical education to the school curriculum will be changed the entire society implicitly.
Currently, obesity and overweight have become the main health issue in many developed countries. Unhealthy diet plans and lack of exercises are the main reasons for these issues, which can be solved by a simple plan. When people start to do physical activities as a part of the life, they will continue it forever, which help to resolve current major health issues.
In conclusion, to resolve the problem which, healthcare systems face due to the overweight people, physical education lessons should be introduced to the school curriculum. It will make sure to generate a healthy next generation and convert the current generation to more healthier than now.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 268, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...n and convert the current generation to more healthier than now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4679245283 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82415457378 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501886792453 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.085380459 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174634171852 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713961283805 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590201464687 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109949490108 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503272935882 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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