You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
explain why you have changed your job
describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
Hi Sejal,
I hope you and your family are doing well in this pandemic situation. I am feeling very excited about writing this letter to you. Last week I got hired by one of the multi-national company, which is located in my town and it is known as Cooke and Denison Ltd.
As you know that I am very eager to learn new skills and develop myself with time. There were not many new things to learn at my previous job and the pay was less for a Master of a mechanical engineer. I chose that job because I did not have a strong experience related to the CNC Machinist field, which is one of my favorite fields among all in mechanical engineering. At my new workplace, they are offering me excellent pay compared to the previous one, as well as all health benefits and yearly paid leaves, and sick leaves too.
To discuss my new job, it is a place which I have dreamed of when I started my study in mechanical engineering. My colleagues are very cooperative, supportive, and ready to help at any point in the work. On my first day, my department head introduced me to the all employees and showed me my work table. It was one of the amazing days of my life.
Since joining the company, it is been here for over 5 months and I can't believe, how time flew away. In this time span, I have learned many new methods and came to know about advanced technology they have. When I received an offer letter I was on cloud nine and out of self-control, as I have had prepared a lot for the interview. I can not wait to see and treat you for the achievement I got recently.
Yours Lovingly,
Amit Savaliya
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 68, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...it is been here for over 5 months and I cant believe, how time flew away. In this ti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 302.0 206.0 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3178807947 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55070074587 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562913907285 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6978797071 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5625 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204823291125 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692059350625 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589558357237 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107786991053 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325435013143 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.