You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend.
In your letter:
explain why you have changed your job describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
Dear Alex
In this letter, I want to keep you posted on the latest changes that I have made in my career path.
As I told you before, I was pretty frustrated with the low wage of my previous job. And day after day, my duties become a heavier burden on my shoulders. At last, one day, I went crazy with my boss for the massive tasks that she gave to me. And after a lot of arguments, I left that horrible place. But very soon, I found my way to be an entrepreneur.
Not until two months ago did l start my own business in setting CV cameras in residential and factorial buildings. To be honest, I finally find my peace of mind. As I not only earn enough money for living but also achieve a better work-life balance, so I can spend more time on relaxing and traveling.
Let me finish with a piece of news about my last contract. You will be amazed if you hear that I signed a three-thousand-dollar contract with Hilton Hotels for installing and upgrading its cameras. Eventually, the old fashion ones need to be replaced with new qualities. Accordingly, I need your financial advice to manage my new income.
Hope to see you soon.
Goodbye
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed a three-thousand-dollar contract with Hilton Hotels for installing and upgradi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37089201878 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73039308476 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680751173709 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.672189215 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143230845316 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469263576245 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510852420028 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843907939969 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511144848409 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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