You have recently visited a tourist attraction and were very pleased by the help given to you by the staff. Write a letter to the staff manager and say
– Give details of your visit.
– Describe how the staff helped you.
– What do you want the manager to do?
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to show my gratitude for the service that I got from your workforce. Allow me to explain why I would like to tell you this.
Last week, I went to visit Cox’s Bazar sea beach which is situated beside your Grand Sultan resort. After reaching the resort, I and my family members took rest and in the afternoon, we moved to the seashore and passed quality time there. At night, we got back to the hotel room and discover that we left our bag in the coast area. I, immediately, informed this to your staff, Xander, and asked for help. Instantly, informing it to the tourist police and he, himself, went to the place to check the lost property. After couple of hours, Xander came back with the carrier without any kinds of missing.
Now, I want you to issue a letter of appreciation to the staff so that others can get motivation to dedicate themselves for the welfare of others. If possible, you can include this kinds of contribution in the service records of the workers. So, at the time of evaluation of annual benefits, it can be taken into consideration.
I look forward to hearing from you soon,
R
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 177, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...of others. If possible, you can include this kinds of contribution in the service re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58173076923 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52102384075 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644230769231 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5670507559 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4166666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195465730451 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654841327253 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623273950611 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115607931526 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268589613454 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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