29.09.2017
You have recently visited a tourist attraction and were very pleased by the help given to you by the staff. Write a letter to the staff manager and say
– Give details of your visit.
– Describe how the staff helped you.
– What do you want the manager to do?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my happiness with the service provided by your employees.
I am a businessman and a week ago I visited the capital of Russia because of some business issues. When the deal had been done, I still had a day to spend in your city, so I followed a piece of advice and visited your zoo. The experience was incredible and joyful due to professionalism and personal qualities of some members of your staff.
Primarily, I do not speak or read in Russian and I had a hard time to understand the information about animals and their habitat that was written on tablets near cages and cells with the displayed creatures. A janitor who was cleaning a cage noticed my struggle and helped me by translating the info. Moreover, it was the time of feeding and another employee whose duty is to feed animals allowed me to give some fruits and vegetables to such marvelous creatures as zebras, giraffes and even elephants.
I would like that the benevolent conduct of those workers become known to others, perhaps, they may be praised as examples of ideal employees who adore their work and like to help visitors. In addition, if it is possible to reward them with promotion or a pay rise, it would be ideal.
Sincerely yours,
Eugene Dubinchuk
Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Don't repeat words, especially when they are close to each other:
as examples of ideal employees
it would be ideal.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 226 250
No. of Characters: 1018 1200
No. of Different Words: 144 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.877 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.504 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.624 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 69 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.696 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.303 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.756 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.059 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, still, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70796460177 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6959069866 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637168141593 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7617285539 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0928283669417 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325837402509 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259634846851 0.0603063233224 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514214835905 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329084060633 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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