You have rented an apartment and the neighbours are disturbing you. Write a letter to your landlord.
Explain what problem is
What did you do to solve the problem.
What action you want the owner to take.
Dear Mr. Moore,
I am a tenant of your flat number 152 in urban estate, writing to inform you about my neighbours who are causing a lot of disturbance (inconvenience) for us to live.
My neighbours have two children who are 15 and 18 years old. Both of them are learning to play musical instruments one is Drum and another is Piano. Lisa, 15 years old girl, starts playing Piano at 5 a.m. and her brother, Peter, practices on Drum till late night. I and my wife are working in Multinational companies and we have to work for entire day. But at the time of sleeping they disturb us and we could not get enough sleep which affects on our performance in work.
I visited to Mr. White’s, my neighbour, and politely explained him about my situation and requested him to ask his children to practice at the evening or around 7 in the morning, so that we will get sufficient rest. He started arguing and defied my proposal.
I would request you to kindly meet with my neighbour and solve this matter or otherwise complaint to the local council.
Hoping for the prompt and positive outcome on this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Patrick Smith.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Moore, I am a tenant of your flat number 152 in...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ive. My neighbours have two children who are 15 and 18 years old. Both of them are l...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64705882353 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65021598215 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68137254902 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2086949674 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1818181818 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118183005475 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410687144219 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517604123772 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716731028553 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653878898483 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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