You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- years old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter.
Explain why you would like the job
Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter to express in interest in the recently published vacancy in the Times magazine on 1st January, Friday edition. Furthermore, I really like your job because this position offers accommodation with childcare. Therefore, I would love to grab this opportunity.
Allow me to elaborate my experience and educational background in this regard. I am glad to inform you that I fulfill all mentioned requirements and eligible criteria. I have completed a graduation degree in children education and development from Punjab University. Moreover, I have also got an opportunity to complete my one year internship in childcare.
Furthermore, I would like to share with you that my next term for post graduation will resume in the next 7 to 8 months and during this time span I would prefer to spend my leisure time living with family and taking care of the kid. I really love to spend my time with children like playing with them in the garden and love to teach them basis manners.
I would be happy to send you references from my previous employers if you require them. Also, if you find my skills and experience suitable for this job, please feel free to contact me to schedule an interview with you.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours Sincerely,
Deepak Sharma
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-01-04 | deepaksharma69 | 78 | view |
- You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture Write a letter to your landlord In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furnit 78
- You would like to participate in a work related seminar in another country Canada Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates program accommodation and cost 78
- You want to apply for work permit in a city abroad where you had never been to Hence you want to seek information about that city from a friend who is living in that city Write a letter to your friend to request information about the city you are planning 89
- You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was damaged Write a letter to the company that sold you the item In your letter give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them 91
- You said you would attend a friend s dinner party but you did not go Write a letter to your friend In the letter Apologize for not attending Explain why you did not attend Say what you will do to make up for it 91
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my one year internship in childcare. Furthermore, I would like to share with ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est. Yours Sincerely, Deepak Sharma
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8813559322 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78749155407 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597457627119 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5506174985 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2857142857 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267617425995 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086361836626 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575314329237 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147019904126 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501774365661 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my one year internship in childcare. Furthermore, I would like to share with ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est. Yours Sincerely, Deepak Sharma
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8813559322 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78749155407 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597457627119 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5506174985 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2857142857 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267617425995 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086361836626 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575314329237 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147019904126 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501774365661 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.