You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child Write a letter to the parents In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would

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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement, published last week in one of the leading Australian family magazines for the caregiver for your six-month-old child.

Yesterday, I came across this news while flipping the pages of magazines that stated that you are looking for a short live-in caretaker for your 6-year-old baby. I am a part-time employee in a shopping store and looking for another part-time job to utilize my free time effectively. Moreover, I like to spend time with babies.

I have 2 two years of experience to take the best care of babies. Apart from this, I also have the knowledge of raising 2 younger siblings as the eldest child of my family. Besides, I consider children as a bundle of joy and happiness and are so special, therefore I have completed a short-term online course online on parenting.

Last month, I came to Australia from my home country for 8-month training as a sales executive. And, while I am in Australia, I would like to explore the beauty and culture of the country, in addition to taking care of your child if you choose me for this job.

I hope you will give me a chance.

Thanking you.

Yours faithfully,

Aspect AUR

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7641509434 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77648737877 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2274335835 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8181818182 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360246099199 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112795588795 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086462223904 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177412429574 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892824479693 0.0580467560999 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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