Dear Sir,
My name is Catherine Jose and I am from Punjab, India. This is in response to the advertisement you posted in the Australian job bank mentioning that you require a language trainer to tutor Punjabi to your children.
I am Master of Philosophy in Punjabi and I have 4-year experience of teaching Punjabi in a reputed School in Ludhiana, Punjab. I am competent enough for the job and possess a great patience level to handle young children. I am skilled at providing a personalised environment to students as I believe that every student learns differently. I constantly take feedback from the pupils and keep asking them for any doubts and queries.
Apart from that, I can also assist in babysitting your children as I have studied a 6-month course for caregiving. As you have mentioned in the advert that you both are working, I can take care of your children as well as teach them in your absence. I am seeking a full-time job from 9 am to 5 pm during which I will provide a 2 hour Language class to your children. I can also run errands if the occasion calls for it.
I am eager to take this job as my brother is living in Melbourne, Australia and my parents also recently went to live with him. I want to unite with family as I am the only one left in India. Moreover, my brother lives in the area where you reside so it will be convenient for me in terms of accommodation as well as commuting as he can drop me at your place on his way to work. Also, I am really keen to uptake this job as I love tutoring young children and hence I don’t want to miss this valuable opportunity.
Looking forward to a prompt and positive revert.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... that every student learns differently. I constantly take feedback from the pupil...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...rking, I can take care of your children as well as teach them in your absence. I am seekin...
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...rrands if the occasion calls for it. I am eager to take this job as my brother...
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Suggestion:
...nd positive revert. Yours sincerely, XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, moreover, really, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 937.175257732 147% => OK
No of words: 310.0 206.0 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45161290323 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69260365893 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 290.88556701 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3330821433 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.25 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288120777147 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894944822468 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807693842635 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149318784671 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985712684752 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.