A lot of people are facing health issues resulted due to obesity, and this is curbing the overall health care system. It is often argued by some that to overcome this problem, physical education should be included as a subject at school. I totally agree with this statement, as educating young people with the importance of physical activities can indirectly grow awareness regarding the weight management among parents and adults.
Obesity is one of the leading problem across the globe. It is a result of unhealthy eating habits and less physical activity. Obese people are prone to Cardiac problems, Arthritis, Diabetes and many other chronic diseases. All such health problems are difficult to manage and also puts a lot of financial pressure as well. A large amount of fund goes to provide treatment for these health problems, which otherwise could be used elsewhere. So, it is really important for everyone to try to stay fit and healthy by following health eating habits and doing regular exercise.
Few things can be done in order to manage the over growing obese population. Firstly, schools can include physical education as a part of their academic subject. By doing this, students would be educated well and made understand the importance of staying healthy. Secondly, along with the students, the parents or elder sibling at home might want to change their prospective towards life, by watching these young generation getting involved in healthy living. For instance, when parents see their child doing exercise they may join them and make it a family activity.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that by including physical training in a child's curriculum, the problem of obesity can be managed efficiently. However, parents shall also take some interest in doing such physical activities with their child as well as they should take part in sharing healthy eating habits too.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15909090909 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58652552063 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8076920174 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23834224832 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750244492599 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667716296074 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155648910928 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110634372028 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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