You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
explain why you are interested in the job
Dear sir or Madam,
The purpose of my writing is to enquire about the position published in an English newspaper.
First of all, I would like to share my details relevant to the job working in the city Museum shop. Myself pursuing an archaleogical science as a major in the Cambridge university college. I am looking for a part-time job related to my field and I heard that you were recruiting an employee in your store.
Consequently, I was passionate in a research area and very excited to join in your retail store. Although I do not have much experience in that employment, I have qualities such as Hard worker, Keen observer, dedicated to the opportunity.
Lastly, I am interested to spend my vacation time in a useful manner. Hence, I decided to apply for the job. I am fond of collecting historical items such as coins, statues, stamps, etc. Therefore, if you provide a job, I will enhance my skills and moreover, it will very fruitful for my future career.
Your support in this matter is much appreciated. Furthermore, an open line of communication, from your side, in this case, would greatly help out.
Thanks,
Aarthi
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir or Madam, The purpose of my writing is to enquire ...
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...observer, dedicated to the opportunity. Lastly, I am interested to spend my vaca...
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...am interested to spend my vacation time in a useful manner. Hence, I decided to apply for the job....
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... etc. Therefore, if you provide a job, I will enhance my skills and moreover, it ...
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...ill very fruitful for my future career. Your support in this matter is much appr...
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...ase, would greatly help out. Thanks, Aarthi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, look, moreover, therefore, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79187817259 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89523496959 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649746192893 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9912971807 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 4.34317383033 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286933562234 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865991515902 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818152664174 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13315603305 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797482355706 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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