You have seen an advertisement for an evening course to study a foreign language. Write a letter to the institution offering the course. In your letter ask for details of the course, ask if the course teachers are qualified native speakers, request that the institute sends you their brochure.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inquire about the French language course as advertised by your institute in the daily mail.
To elucidate I am keen to join this course as I work for a company which is operating in African countries where customers speak French dialect, therefore, learning this language will make business transactions much easier. Hence I would need a detailed overview of the course for instance course content, fee structure and course length as the advert published in the newspaper was brief. Additionally, I would like to know if the course teachers are native French speaker as I have seen many institutes who employ native French tutors since the native speakers have better linguistic command over the language. Although I have attended short courses on the French language from In-lingua in the past however I am more interested to learn the language in-depth as this will help me in my professional endeavour.
Lastly, I request you to send me a detailed brochure with the details about the course and the advantages of attending French classes from your institute.
Looking forward to your response
Yours sincerely
Saud
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...tute. Looking forward to your response Yours sincerely Saud
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...ward to your response Yours sincerely Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, lastly, look, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13089005236 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71580930587 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628272251309 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0204043083 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 76.5299724578 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 4.34317383033 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243286154234 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11225690237 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497088800453 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132541210387 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555732311061 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 8.37731958763 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.