You have seen an advertisement looking for volunteers to teach English overseas. Write to the recruitment office. In your letterTell them where you saw the advertisementExplain why you would like to goDescribe the skills that you have that you think would

Essay topics:

You have seen an advertisement looking for volunteers to teach English overseas. Write to the recruitment office. In your letter

Tell them where you saw the advertisement
Explain why you would like to go
Describe the skills that you have that you think would help

Dear Sir/Madam,

With reference to your advertisement published in 'New York Times', dated 1st July, 2018, I would like to apply for the post of English Volunteers Overseas.

I'm currently training aspiring candidates overseas online via a freelancing vendor, named, English Tutors Online. It would be a wonderful experience teaching students overseas physically as well, if provided with this opportunity.

With regard to my qualification and skills, please note that I hold a PhD. in English Literature. I had been working as English Lecturer for various universities for eight years.

Currently, I'm in contract with 'English Learning Made Easy', an Academy for English aspirants, for the past 10 years. I have been teaching students both via online classes as well as physical classes. Transforming students' lives has been our greatest achievement. I'm confident that I will do the same for the candidates overseas. I would be much obliged to serve your training firm with the best of my abilities, if provided the opportunity to do so.

Looking forward to hearing from you in the near future.

Yours faithfully,
Krithika.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'July 2018'.
Suggestion: July 2018
... published in New York Times, dated 1st July, 2018, I would like to apply for the post of ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...post of English Volunteers Overseas. Im currently training aspiring candidates ...
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Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...rsities for eight years. Currently, Im in contract with English Learning Made ...
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Line 9, column 171, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...aching students both via online classes as well as physical classes. Transforming students...
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Line 9, column 263, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ives has been our greatest achievement. Im confident that I will do the same for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, as well as, with reference to, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38547486034 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98325068523 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653631284916 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1850748001 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1538461538 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210769093709 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063852933625 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510236173196 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114771508622 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538611195649 0.0580467560999 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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