You have seen an advertisement in your local newspaper for a hotel receptionist.
Write a letter of application to the hotel manager. Write about your experience and qualifications and say why you would like the job. Also state when you would be available for an interview.
Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to apply for the position of office administrator that was advertised in The Times newspaper on Wednesday 8th August. I have over ten years’ office experience. I have recently moved here from England to be closer to my parents and I am looking for a chance to further develop my career in this country. my previous experience includes five years with abc company in their head office, and another five years at the main branch of Sigma Securities where I was responsible for the day-to-day activities related to financial planning, billing and recordkeeping. At abc company, I was involved in personnel recruitment, as part of the human resources team, and I had overall responsibility for physical distribution and logistics. my Curriculum Vitae and application form are attached. One of my main strengths is flexibility, and this is a key asset in a rapidly changing work environment. I have good communication skills, and enjoy sharing ideas and cooperating as part of a dynamic team. I am a reliable and hardworking team player and I feel I would be an asset to your workplace. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ther develop my career in this country. my previous experience includes five years...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...or physical distribution and logistics. my Curriculum Vitae and application form a...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I would be an asset to your workplace. I look forward to hearing from you soon. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92462311558 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14598550816 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653266331658 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0825929493 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157998224414 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613517629605 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500303488468 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157998224414 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.