You have seen an advertisement in your local newspaper for a hotel receptionist.Write a letter of application to the hotel manager. Write about your experience and qualifications and say why you would like the job. Also state when you would be available f

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You have seen an advertisement in your local newspaper for a hotel receptionist.
Write a letter of application to the hotel manager. Write about your experience and qualifications and say why you would like the job. Also state when you would be available for an interview

Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to express my keen interest for the role of hotel receptionist at your reputed hotel as advertised in a local newspaper. I believe I am right fit for this role. Let me explain in detail.

To elucidate I have attained bachelors in Hospitality and customer services from Sydney University and have worked with many reputed hotel chains as a receptionist in my past life. Overall in a total working experience of 5 years where by I have been majorly responsible for making bookings, attending to call from customers, conflict management with the clients. Additionally I can speak a few lingo like French, Spanish and Arabic which can prove to be a most valuable skills while attending to foreign customers. Last year I was awarded the best employee of the year award from my employer for exceptional customer service skills.

Lastly I believe that working as a receptionist not only provides opportunities to interact with customers from different parts of the globe but also helps you to improve on key skills like customer service, conflict management. Therefore I am available for an interview on Thursday and Friday from 9 am to 5 pm.
I hope that you will give me a due consideration for this position.
Yours sincerely
Said

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to express my ...
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Message: Did you mean 'whereby'?
Suggestion: whereby
...n a total working experience of 5 years where by I have been majorly responsible for mak...
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Line 4, column 365, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
..., conflict management with the clients. Additionally I can speak a few lingo like French, Sp...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... customer service, conflict management. Therefore I am available for an interview on Thur...
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Line 6, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thursday and Friday from 9 am to 5 pm. I hope that you will give me a due consi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion for this position. Yours sincerely Said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93023255814 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94802277653 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637209302326 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7358749876 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3636363636 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209945037535 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723607679831 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561745827269 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120493112008 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335422606832 0.0580467560999 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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