You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter
• provide information about yourself
• give details of your previous work experience
• say why the company should consider you for the job
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear …,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to a job advertisement for the position of Senior Software Architect, posted by your company, in the "Job Hunt" column of a local tabloid. I would like to apply for this role as my qualification and work experience makes me a suitable candidate.
My name is Ashfaq Memon. I am an Indian national, who has been working in Singapore for last six years. I have completed Master of Science in Computer Engineering from National University of Singapore, and Bachelor of Engineering in Computer Engineering from Gujarat University, India. I have a beautiful family in Singapore, including my wife and a 2-year old son.
Under my belt is 6 years of experience in designing, developing and maintaining complex software systems for different disciplines including medical devices, printers and industrial automation. I am currently working as a Senior Software Engineer at Schneider Electric, where I am part of a team which is responsible for complete Product Design Life Cycle (PDLC) of a Programmable Logic Controller (PLC). I also lead a small team of software engineers to assign them technical tasks and take regular updates.
I follow your company on LinkedIn where I get regular updates about your new products and current openings. I am particularly intrigued by a news that your organization is going to design a state-of-the-art software for completely automated vehicle. I got excited when I saw this advertisement that your company is looking for enthusiastic engineers to work on this project.
Please spare some of your precious time to look into my resume which I have attached with this letter. I am open for a formal interview to further discuss my candidacy.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Ashfaq Memon
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...neering from Gujarat University, India. I have a beautiful family in Singapore, i...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ical tasks and take regular updates. I follow your company on LinkedIn where I...
^
Line 8, column 109, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...your new products and current openings. I am particularly intrigued by a news tha...
^
Line 8, column 140, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...penings. I am particularly intrigued by a news that your organization is going to desi...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 251, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tware for completely automated vehicle. I got excited when I saw this advertiseme...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 937.175257732 163% => OK
No of words: 294.0 206.0 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18027210884 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13809199379 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 127.690721649 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608843537415 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 290.88556701 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9355103933 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1875 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219119940727 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669648851095 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528313682316 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107769281893 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678547739019 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 41.2886597938 225% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.