You have a spare room in your apartment that you would like to rent out to a student. Write a letter to the Student Accommodation Officer of a local college.
In your letter, you should tell:
· where your apartment is located
· when the room will be available
· what your requirements for a student to stay there are.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Ell Green and have one vacant room in my apartment. With this letter, I would like to seek your help to find out a student who is looking for accommodation in the vicinity of a college campus.
My flat number is 701 and located in DLF Phase 4, Gurgaon. This flat is situated in a gated society and the room to be rented has all the facilities, such as 24-hour power backup, in-suite washroom, geyser and Wi-FI internet connection. In addition to this, the window overlooks a lushed greenery. To cap it all, supermarket and metro station are at five minutes walking distance.
With regards to the date of availability, an interested student may move-in anytime on September 15. Though the room is currently vacant, it would be a good idea to inform me one week in advance to get it ready for a new tenant.
As far as my requirements for a new flatmate are concerned, perhaps it would be a good idea to rent it out to a female student with decent, responsible and outgoing nature. Also, please ensure that the new tenant should be a non-smoker and most importantly, she should sign an agreement for at least six months and pay two months of rent in advance.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ell Green
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, may, so, at least, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66519823789 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.666897918 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63436123348 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0128189328 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231467688924 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711747455367 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575268535505 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113320025643 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624354654487 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.