The movement of people from villages to cities for work can cause serious problems in both
places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to
solve these problems?
Urbanisation presents urban and rural spaces with some serious problems in relation to congested roads and food scarcity. The solution to these problems lies in the appropriate use of government funds.
The most serious problems associated with rural-urban migration are related to traffic congestion and food shortage. With regard to the former, overpopulation in cities promotes an increasing number of private vehicles on city roads and causes traffic jams during rush hours, which makes people late to work and also difficult for them to inhale fresh air. As far as the countryside is concerned, the use of agricultural land to make room for more accommodation and commercial developments puts pressure on the food supply. As people migrate to cities, the increase in urban demand and loss of agricultural land makes it difficult for farmers to grow crops and produce food.
The role of the government among other measures could offer the best chance to solve the above-mentioned problems. As for solving the traffic problem, building widen roads and investing funds to improve the public transport system could reduce the congestion on roads, as there would be more lanes and people would be encouraged to use public transport facilities. Another step that could be taken by the administration is to launch new agricultural projects and fix the minimum wage for field workers so that they do not feel the need to migrate to cities. This would prevent urban sprawling and thereby enable the farmers to produce food.
In conclusion, urbanisation causes issues in both metropolitans and villages in terms of increased traffic and food shortage. These problems can be alleviated by investing public funds in improving roads infrastructure and public transportation and introducing projects in favour of farmers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as for, in conclusion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34843205575 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96025791183 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8753775926 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.916666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273292139815 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936661408786 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543320564732 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166340135243 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238693083212 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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