You have recently taken a two-day course. Write to give your feedback to the course organiser.
In your letter, you should tell:
· the details of the course
· what you liked or disliked about it
· suggest some improvements to the course.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regard to a course I completed recently. Since I have profound admiration for your work, I would like to leave feedback about the two-day cooking course.
Giving details of the program, it was kind of day release training that had been holding for 2 days. This course has involved a couple of lectures about using flavouring and up-to-the-minute methods to prepare seafood and practices. As for the practices are concerned, we were able to apply al theoretical knowledge and cooked a tender and juicy fish. All these dishes indeed have stirred our imagination.
I had been taking great delight in doing this course. In addition, I would like to highlight highly professional staff and proven qualification of teachers. They not only have inspired us doing our best but also assist us during fulfilment challenging tasks. However, being a very costly program, your kitchen has been seemed low-tech with scarcity necessary tools such as knives or graters.
I honestly believe it would be a good idea to invest in the development of the kitchen. Furthermore, well-appointed classrooms might enhance your popularity among younger generations. I strongly advise you to add some cutting-edge devices in order to be able to cook dishes from different cuisines.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Mrs. Helen
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eration. Yours faithfully, Mrs. Helen
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, honestly, however, if, so, well, as for, in addition, kind of, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18918918919 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97660166209 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702702702703 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0488516002 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236974435447 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654481150186 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584647508539 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131909802218 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787102793451 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.