Passionate about sports as a child fail to endure throughout adulthood. The root cause of this tendency is a lack of motivation and hectic pace of life which hinder the importance of exercise. This essay will outline the main causes in detail and will examine some possible remedy to tackle this development.
To begin with, the lack of strong parental reinforcement and independent life with plenty of responsibilities tends to bring about the shortage of motivation. In other words, in childhood, children in many cases were encouraged and reinforced by their parents when it came to doing sports activity. This is in marked contrast to adults, who no longer can motivate themselves without parental control and support which in turn has always played as inspiration to participate in the competition with a dozen of excitement. Furthermore, the hectic pace of life strongly influences people’s preferences. It would mean that whereas serene evenings with a family or friends even paid unsocial hours for extra income to buy luxuries would appear to be more preferable than playing sport in a series of mundane routine.
As far as potential solutions are concerned, encouragement and providing particular time for sport whether at work or everyday life may increase enthusiasm towards doing sports activity. This is because only an inspired person can find proper time and willpower to summon up the energy for doing exercises. To illustrate, plenty of well-known companies as Google and Facebook have organized sports classes with plenty of activities for their employees. Executives have grasped the importance of doing sport. Moreover, conducting sports competition for the whole family may not only give rise to strengthening family bonds but also give the opportunity to spend quality time with family.
In conclusion, although people reduce their sport activity throughout their lives due to lack of motivation and hectic pace of life, encouragement and organization sports-related environment can motivate them to play sport at work or with their family.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, in many cases, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37230769231 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97978355911 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596923076923 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5137241775 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.714285714 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170312289821 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597984215814 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342671007197 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104967112865 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012559597193 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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