Currently, couples around the world are choosing to start a family at an older age than used to. Although, it seems to be a negative trend by some, personally, I believe that it benefits family because at this age couples are quite responsible to create a strong family and enough financially stable to raise children.
To begin with, the mature age of couples above the thirties plays a crucial role when it comes to creating an immediate family. This is because they are enough mature to create a unit of society and bear responsibility for their decision and their children. It would mean that a couple should be adept at dealing with a variety of situations and strong enough to overcome many hardships that come along with parenthood. For instance, dealing with children’s tantrums or quarrels with relatives. Parents from this family apparently might be known how to avoid negative interaction for the family sake and proper risen. Besides, having a mature relationship in a full family concerning each other is also vital for being a good role model for offspring and providing a stable upbringing.
Moreover, children being born later seems to have a better opportunity for proper education and healthcare. What I mean by this, parent of mature age might be significantly more financially stable in comparison to younger ones. Whereas younger counterpart who just graduated from university or at the beginning of their career would likely run up financial difficulties. Hence, covering annual fees, making a payment for educational courses, life insurance and other living expenses would be beyond the capability of young couples. It is therefore clear that getting changing marital status above the thirties may affect the welfare of future development of children.
In conclusion, emotional maturity and financial stability are essential for the parental role; since young parents may have not enough both of them to go through ordeals related to parenthood. In my opinion, this is a positive practice not only for strong bonding but also for stable upbringing and welfare.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18639053254 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8074553619 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.191834561 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.866666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206531694635 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709444143286 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383115821916 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125043595728 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408575231579 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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