You attended a meeting last week, but you were not happy with the hotel which you stayed in. Write a letter to the organizer who booked the hotel for you.
In your letter, you should tell:
– what the problems were
– what you didn’t like about the hotel
– what you want organizer to do.
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the hotel I have stayed in recently during the meeting you organized. Let me elaborate on this situation.
Last week I was lucky enough to attend your meeting at the banquet hall of the hotel. However, unfortunately. I had some difficulties with my wireless connection in my room and I had experienced an issue with air conditioning when the temperature rose above 35 degrees. For these complexities I was not able to download up-to-the-minute graphics into my presentation, in addition, the stress level has been increased due to malfunction cooling system.
Nevertheless, what I did not like more was staff at the hotel. I was disappointed with the service. You can imagine how unhappy I was to discover that nobody could tackle my problems. Furthermore, no one could offer me any sensible answer and I have been denied with service I requested.
I believe this matter deserves your urgent attention since these kinds of inconveniences have a huge impact on a decent and well-organized meeting. Please look into this matter as soon as possible in order to avoid interaction with unprofessional staff of the hotel where you may book rooms.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Mrs Helen Pr
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, well, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05633802817 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23124772964 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3106888051 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8461538462 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.49484536082 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271821936537 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854874293155 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876346937572 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168351812973 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629252178091 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.