You attended a meeting last week, but you were not happy with the hotel which you stayed in. Write a letter to the organizer who booked the hotel for you.
In your letter, you should tell:
– what the problems were
– what you didn’t like about the hotel
– what you want organizer to do.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complaint about the poor hospitality services of JW Marriott Hotel which you had booked in for our company members to stay in for business conference in Toronto for three working days last week.
Let me explain you briefly about the problems faced during our business tour in Toronto. Firstly, Lack of rooms are available for our company workers, due to less rooms available, most of our staff members shared the rooms and couldn't able to enjoy the services of their private space during night and late evening times. Secondly, everyday we received our complementary lunch cold and tasteless which led us to starve till evening after the conference. And, we had to pay to the nearest restaurant for our meals.
Moreover, we asked the hotel staff to provide a fresh towels, soaps, and shampoos which was not been delivered during our stay. It was astounding and shocking for me to see such inconvenient and inadequate service by the hotel and it's working staff. Therefore, I request you to call the hotel manager and inform about the bad experience served to me and my company staff last week. Plus, ask for a compensation as we had paid you for the homestay services during the business conference.
I am hoping to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun rooms is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ailable for our company workers, due to less rooms available, most of our staff memb...
^^^^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... our staff members shared the rooms and couldnt able to enjoy the services of their pri...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: WAS_BEEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'was not' or 'has not been'?
Suggestion: was not; has not been
...fresh towels, soaps, and shampoos which was not been delivered during our stay. It was astou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90134529148 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55286560665 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591928251121 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3582027848 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3636363636 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244793211779 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102718041594 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824309326382 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17945355625 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663345545363 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.