Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession.
Is this a positive or negative development?
It is quite often that well-known figures with large platforms gravitate towards expressing their personal opinion, although they are unversed in that issue. Personally, I believe it is a negative tendency due to powerful influence on citizens.
To begin with, having shared their opinion, famous people may force personal views on the public. It may appear to be detrimental to the public prosperity. What I mean by this, celebrities’ points of view might be the polar opposite to common sense, however, it can be voiced only because the last ones follow the surrounding hype. Furthermore, in order to gain more attention, household names tend to come out and participate in a heated discussion to spark off a new wave of gossip around. To illustrate, a renowned model recently has posted a post related to vaccination about how it is harmful to DNA humanity with no proven evidence. This view has become widespread, wildly disconcerting among their millions of followers.
In addition, average people tend to look for information about public matters from easy-to-read media, where famous actors or singers tend to occupy the top of the news feed. It would mean, being far from public affairs, they not only would impact on the population but also may merely be the one source of knowledge. It is therefore clear, that they are responsible for public opinion, which under no circumstances should not be based on their own views and mood on this matter. Otherwise, they impose their judgments, not the truth.
In conclusion, popular stars such as singers and actors have strong opinions of distinct fields that they convey in public. I hold the view that they have shown negative development and outcomes that are not in the public favor, such as imposing their views and being considered a reliable resource of news.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, look, may, so, therefore, well, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03973509934 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74638883592 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612582781457 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9365930228 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.714285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304745706876 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101930240852 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081421218316 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177066083779 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453959744559 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.