The movement of people from villages to cities for work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?
Urbanization in need of a job causes significant problems related to traffic congestion and shortage of food. The respective measures could be taken by the government to solve these problems.
The most serious problems associated with the migration of people from the countryside to metropolitan cities are traffic jams and food scarcity. With regard to the former, the ease with which the village population is migrating towards metro cities is a great concern to the increased number of vehicles on the roads. Many people in urban areas drive to work, which creates severe traffic problems, especially during peak hours. Another problem associated with urban migration is the food shortage as the population in cities will increase which give rise to the sprawling urban areas. As a result of which, rural land would be utilized by the commercial industries, and in the end, there would be no land left for agriculture and farmers would not have any land available to produce crops.
The solution to these problems lies in the hands of the government. As far as traffic jam is concerned, the government should work on widening of the roads and increase public transport. Once metros have wider roads and public is offered with good public buses and local trains, the problem of traffic congestion would be solved automatically as everyone's preferable mode of transportation would be public transport. Which in turn drastically reduces the number of private vehicles on the road. Turning to the scarcity of food, the government should come up with some agricultural projects and set the minimum wage for the field workers so that they do not feel the need for urban migration. Not only would this prevent urban cities to expand, but it would save the farming land, which could be utilized to produce an abundance of crops.
In conclusion, in response to the scarcity of food caused by urbanization, the government needs to take responsibility for the agricultural projects. As for traffic jams, wider roads, and better public transportation could be the possible solution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ansportation would be public transport. Which in turn drastically reduces the number ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as for, in conclusion, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16814159292 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8195282205 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516224188791 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1330975949 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238630734928 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876223089529 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672788409846 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150920440167 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562615850977 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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