Nowadays, pollution and waste levels are increasing rapidly. How does this affect ordinary people? What steps can be taken to overcome this problem?
Contamination and waste levels are proliferating these days. Although its increase has devastated human lives, plenty of solutions are present to minimize its effect.
The most serious dangers associated with air pollution and debris levels are related to humans health. With regard to the former, impurities in the air are increasing at a rapid pace due to fuel combustion from public vehicles. As a result, common people are getting infected by hazardous diseases like lung cancer. For example, senior citizens and children when exposed to this poisonous environment they will not be able to breathe fresh air thereby becoming victims of such diseases. Another major concern is the increase in garbage levels due to industrial waste. The harmful left-over coming out of industries is being dumped on the roadside and this leads to the outbreak of diseases like flu, dengue, and many more.
These two problems require quite different approaches. As far as, air contamination is concerned, it is the responsibility of the government to increase eco-friendly vehicles. Furthermore, the government should run the campaigns, demonstrating the benefits of using electric vehicles. Turning to waste levels, the material used in industries should be switched from non-biodegradable to biodegradable, as, the leftover of such material would be less harmful to the environment. Moreover, the government should educate people about the importance of cleanliness and its impact on the surroundings.
In conclusion, air pollution and waste levels have a severe impact on one's health. However, this can be reduced by taking some precautionary measures and by educating the public through awareness campaigns.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53846153846 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10764470641 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611538461538 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1258520291 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217454008558 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633429269628 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034071492327 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1246104473 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478646659253 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.