Nowadays, pollution and waste levels are increasing rapidly. How does this affect ordinary people? What steps can be taken to overcome this problem?
Pollution is destroying the earth with no mercy on anyone. People are treating this world in a selfishness way, without taking into consideration what are the impacts. Increasing in waste and pollution, is killing million of people yearly over this continent and lead to an appearance of new diseases. There should be serious steps to stop this problem, in order to have a good and healthy life.
On one hand, pollution in al its sectors is affecting people lives and ruining it. First, the distribution of the waste randomly will increase the bacteria and produce bad odors in the air, were human is smelling it and might cause him/her pandemic diseases, such as cancer. Second, pollution in all its segments will harm all living creatures in land, ocean or sky; it will devastate the forests, pollute the water and damage the ozone layer. All of these will affect on people and damage the global warming, where life will not be easy. For example, bushfires took place over Australia in 2019, forests, land and houses were destroyed, now people are facing health problems, millions of animals are dead, and some became extinct.
On the other hand, steps must be done from both sides, society and the government to overcome this problem. First, awareness campaigns must be done for all people, on how to treat recycle their waste and not throw it randomly. Second, people are the first ones should help this earth to overcome this pollution problem, by moving to alternative energy like using eco-friendly equipment and tools, which lead to reduce the pollution gradually. However, the governments must play a big role by obliging people to respect the environment or their will be stans on every person not obeying the rules. For example, in Singapore the government fine 200 USD anyone if they throw their cigarettes or paper on the ground.
As a conclusion, human being who destroyed his environment, he can re-build it, by respecting what God gave him and use it in a way won’t harm himself and all the society around. That’s why people are facing health problems due to unbalanced actions. Therefore, serious solutions need to be taken into consideration to overcome this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a selfishness way" with adverb for "selfishness"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... anyone. People are treating this world in a selfishness way, without taking into consideration what...
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Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...sing in waste and pollution, is killing million of people yearly over this continent an...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...roduce bad odors in the air, were human is smelling it and might cause him/her pandemic dis...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...mage the ozone layer. All of these will affect on people and damage the global warming, w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97554347826 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57789648197 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8361758582 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.705882353 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342663057958 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103257797522 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671349261187 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206278773692 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640714126537 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.