In recent years, urbanization and materialization have brought a surge in pollutant emission and amount of waste which has caused plenty of detrimental influences on human beings' life. This essay will delve into the impacts and the solutions to these issues.
To begin with, owing to the rising usage of vehicles, air pollution has become more severe. It has lowered the people's life quality and also enhanced the risk of various serious illnesses, such as, lung cancer, heart diseases, skin allergies, and so on. On the other hand, overconsumption, and failure of the recycling system in some city have led to a high waste level which impelled to overload in landfill sites, for example, in Hong Kong, three landfill sites will be full in the 2020s and the city will be running out of space for trash at that time.
Therefore, it is necessary that the government should take responsibility and give viable approaches to advance these problems. For instance, in order to reduce air pollution, the government can build up a metro system, reduce the number of vehicles, encourage people to take public transportation, and the forth. Also, so as to decrease the waste level, the government should impose a disposal fee on everyone, especially factories and construction industries. In addition, the government should promote a recycling system in the city, for example, in Denmark, there are bottle recycling machines in most supermarkets and it works well because people are willing to take part in recycling while it is convenient for them.
To conclude, the unwanted effect of pollution and the climbing waste level on everyone's everyday life cannot be underestimated. Therefore, all sections of the community should give an effort to remedy their living environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...enty of detrimental influences on human beings life. This essay will delve into the im...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... become more severe. It has lowered the peoples life quality and also enhanced the risk...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ic transportation, and the forth. Also, so as to decrease the waste level, the governmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19163763066 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92207594771 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602787456446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1502570717 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.454545455 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136622334744 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493557406529 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038543655734 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853559607734 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226736740417 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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