Nowadays, pollution and waste levels are increasing rapidly. How does this affect ordinary people? What steps can be taken to overcome this problem?
In the current scenario, the world has been suffering from myriad burning issues and pollution and waste are the most concerning problems in front of society. This essay will discuss both: its impact on people’s lives and highlight plausible solutions to tackle it.
To begin with, these days worsening environment affects quality of people’s lives in a very negative ways. There is a group of people who is suffering from acute or chronic disorders related to respiratory tract system. Moreover, waste treatment produces large amount of hazardous gases in the air which is the prime reason for high mortality rate these days. For an example, as per survey conducted by the World health organization, the number of patients suffering from asthma has been growing by 20% compared to last decades due to air pollution.
To tackle this problem, it is worth mentioning that stern rules and strict legislation by government can curtail level of pollution created by industries and noticed them to use proper treatment of waste as per guidelines only. Furthermore, the local bodies should create awareness to plant more trees which certainly help to reduce air pollution. For an instance, an initiative “Go Green” by the government of India has proved to be one of incredible solution to plant more trees which has increased the quality of air.
In conclusion, an ever-increasing pollution and waste are major threats these days.This essay has not only highlighted how it has impacted quality of life and increase death tolls but also provided pragmatic corrective measures such as government’s responsibility and initiatives to tackle this issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30303030303 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8706323873 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194390078657 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675613847614 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572909620677 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11595524776 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379061967695 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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