Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
offer to help him/her to move
explain how exactly you can help
ask him/her some questions about the new house
Hi James,
I hope you're as fit as fiddle. I'm writing to offer you help for shifting into a new house.
With regard to the assistance, I remember you mentioned moving into a new home when you came over to dinner at my place along with Amma and little Sarah. I've kept my calendar free for the next week to help you while shifting, and I won't mind babysitting, as I know it would be difficult for Amma to pack things with a kid around.
As you know, I'm working for a transport company and we've multiple heavy vehicles which could be used to shift households. In fact, being an employee, we're authorized to borrow the vehicle for our personal use. So, if you need I can bring one for shifting activity which would make your work easier.
As I know you both are fitness freaks, so your new house would be equipped with the latest fitness equipment. I hope parking would not be a problem there as it is in our existing place.
Well, that’s all for now and I look forward to hearing from you.
Cheers,
Jack
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Hi James, I hope youre as fit as fiddle. Im writing to offer y...
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Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... James, I hope youre as fit as fiddle. Im writing to offer you help for shifting ...
^^
Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...place along with Amma and little Sarah. Ive kept my calendar free for the next week...
^^^
Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ngs with a kid around. As you know, Im working for a transport company and wev...
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Line 6, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: we've
... Im working for a transport company and weve multiple heavy vehicles which could be ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, while, in fact, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39682539683 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30393968455 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3473280943 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1653107201 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665682950658 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673425679123 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107228089311 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794199161479 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Hi James, I hope youre as fit as fiddle. Im writing to offer y...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... James, I hope youre as fit as fiddle. Im writing to offer you help for shifting ...
^^
Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...place along with Amma and little Sarah. Ive kept my calendar free for the next week...
^^^
Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ngs with a kid around. As you know, Im working for a transport company and wev...
^^
Line 6, column 53, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: we've
... Im working for a transport company and weve multiple heavy vehicles which could be ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, while, in fact, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39682539683 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30393968455 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3473280943 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1653107201 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665682950658 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673425679123 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107228089311 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794199161479 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.