You have a spare room in your flat or apartment and you want to rent it to a student. Write a letter to the director of the accommodation office at the local college. In your letter:
• Explain where your apartment is
• Describe the room
• What kind of person would you like to rent it to.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I recently came across your advertisement that suggested a shortage of rooms in the college hostel and would like to inform you that I have a spare room available which I would like to rent. Since, my building is just along the sameroad, I believe the location is suitable for commute.
Let me provide a little information about the room. Firstly, it is a master bedroom so is has an attached bathroom thus ensuring complete privacy. Secondly, the room has been recently painted and comprises of a large wardrobe, queen-size bed and a study table with many drawers and cabinets. Thirdly, the room is extremely spacious and well ventilated, that sometimes you don't even need the fan.
Finally, I am a working professional and would preferably want a female roommate. Guests are welcomed, provided they do not create a ruckus. Furthermore, she should be willing to split the expenses equally namely, utilities and rent as they occupy the major chuck.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Smith
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... the room has been recently painted and comprises of a large wardrobe, queen-size bed and a ...
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Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...and well ventilated, that sometimes you dont even need the fan. Finally, I am a w...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01724137931 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74272840849 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.729885057471 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4222513498 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3636363636 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 4.34317383033 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205518750727 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646914908165 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064706267357 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107817421157 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554649227648 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.