You have to submit the project for your university and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for thisWrite a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter

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You have to submit the project for your university and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for this

Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter

Dear Sir

With reference to the receipts number 4657AGH-GTT67 dated 24-Sep-2019 for the purchase of Canon Printer DeskJet 2452, I would like to complain about the performance of this equipment. First of all, it was not easy to configure the printer with my system. As soon as I did, it’s not working properly. The Printer’s response is quite slow. And if prints come after few minutes, colors are faded which is so annoying.

Since I bought the printer specifically for my upcoming project at the university, it’s causing a delay in my project. I have to print multiple print-outs on daily basis in order to discuss with my class fellows. It happened several times that I didn’t reach the institute on time just because I was stuck with the printer. As I can see on the printer manual, it should print at least 20 print outs in a minute. This means 3 seconds for a print. But right it takes more than a minute to reach the signal to the printer. If this situation remains the same it would ruin my whole project.

Therefore, I request you to please change the printer at all. Because I think it would take a lot of time to repair the printer and now I just have only 2 days left to finalize my project. If that is not possible then please send the concerned person at my location to repair or configure the printer properly. May I have not configured it correctly? That would quite helpful for me.

I will really appreciate.

Regards,

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir With reference to the receipts number 46...
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Line 9, column 531, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ute to reach the signal to the printer. If this situation remains the same it woul...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, second, so, then, therefore, at least, i think, first of all, with reference to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68076923077 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66996221412 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0453751405 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6111111111 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4444444444 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11389096954 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390065585866 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341406885112 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622512645297 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397731833687 0.0580467560999 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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