You have travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to d

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to bring your attention towards the missing complaint of my suitcase as I have not received any information regarding this issue up till now.

I flew by your airlines FH1254 on 23/04/17 from New York to Chicago during which I forgot to collect my suitcase while leaving the aircraft by mistake I had kept it in the compartment located above my seat "32C". Later, I wrote a mail to the airport manager explaining the whole situation and requested to find it and return it to me. But sadly I have not got any news from the airport authority.

Although, I have given the description of my suitcase before still I would like to remind you that it is a black color small suitcase with my name written on it. It has inestimable documents which are needed urgently for my project that I am currently working on plus they are highly confidential. So, they should not be leaked in public.

Lastly, I am very keen to know what action has been taken in order to find my suitcase as I am intensively in need of it. Since, I had given all the required information and requested to send it through professional courier, I am even willing to bear the cost involved in it as well.

To recapitulate, I would like to know about the necessary steps that have taken to search my suitcase and return it back to me. I am looking forward to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Richa

Votes
Average: 8 (3 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ny news from the airport authority. Although, I have given the description of my sui...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 150, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...urn it back to me. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Ric...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, lastly, look, regarding, so, still, well, while, mind you

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59215686275 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74225062407 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0512959685 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5833333333 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224868003041 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757443865483 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446071126111 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114743095986 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166628397552 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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